Those quotes come from a different text, also connected to the sacred marriage ritual. I’ve taken the translation from The Electronic Text Corpus of Sumerian Literature.
This is all so hot ... and sweet.
I really like how your sex scenes feel real and fit into the lives of the protagonists. They are a welcome alternative to all the different sorts of annoying stuff (nearly) everywhere else.
... and Aphrodite singing these Sumerian sacred-marriage texts to this makes this epic (No need for realism in that regard :) ).
Thank you! I strive to make my sex scenes pretty realistic. Not too romanticized or as something that is only meant to titillate the audience. I'm really glad you like it. ^^